I wrote this on a feeling I had, I wrote it for my soul mate. I hope it means to him as much as it means to me. He may get on my nerves, or make me upset, but I still love him.
I want to feel your arms around my waist, your breath against my throat.
The warmth of your hugs, the softness in your kiss. What I wouldn't do
to have just one last touch. A touch that would last forever and keep me
smiling. A touch of warmth is everything to desire. A touch of softness
is everything to a smile. Your touch against my skin, your breath
against my throat, is all I desire. You murmuring soft words in my ear
keeping me at bay, your all I ever wanted all I ever needed. Your all I
will desire
Ignore spelling or grammar, this is written and based on the way I felt. I am in love and this is all I desired. This is a true poem, based on my love for him, that I will always feel. I hope this means as much to him as it means to me. I hope other people will have this feeling and won't ever loose it.
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I am so glad that someone can actually feel this way. Still so innocent. I thought I knew pain by the young age of 15; but I had really no idea! Love all you can whilst you can; before the pain gets you. Cos when the pain gets you, you will turn cold and bitter, and you will long for just one moment of innocence to return to you so that you can feel 'love' once again.
Love is grand and awesome. I am very happy you have been blessed with loves knowledge. And now, we the readers, get to share your glory and witness your glow.
Finely penned from the heart Poet Friend! Hugs, AnnaMaria
I am so glad that someone can actually feel this way. Still so innocent. I thought I knew pain by the young age of 15; but I had really no idea! Love all you can whilst you can; before the pain gets you. Cos when the pain gets you, you will turn cold and bitter, and you will long for just one moment of innocence to return to you so that you can feel 'love' once again.
it's a sweet poem...took me back to my distant youth...it has a distinctive teen feel to it...for instance, someone older might write "the warmth of your embrace"...young love is beautiful...lovely / heartfelt words :)
It's a really good poem... I feel like this now... Totally like thiz. The poem is great and I love the descriptions you give about his kiss and hugs and touch. (: