Do you really love me?

This is something I have felt for the longest time. I was finally able to vent it out.

Why can’t you just see.
All The pain it’s causing me.
Maybe we were never meant to be.

You do everything with her but very little with me.
Just Take one look at my heart.
And See all the bloody scars.
You snuggle and play with her.
But do what with me?

Maybe you shouldn’t see the scars.
For all the wounds have been broken through.
Once fully healed now reopened like a painful memory.
Maybe we were never meant to be.
My scars would give you nightmares, like a Dog to a cat.

You healed my heart and ripped it apart.
Why do you talk to her, and never talk to me.
Just leave these wounded scars open and never, heal them back.
Just leave, me to die and never take a look back.

One time I thought you wanted to spend time with me.
But then you talk all about her.
I’m sick of it I want to end it.
Just leave me the f**k alone.
If you loved me.
You’d spend time with me.
So it comes to this.
Do you really love me?
Because I really Love you.                                                                                                

Author's Note

This is something I feel and I need to get off my chest, but i wrote this along long time ago, back in like 2009, lolz no worries. I'm fine now. Hehe I like reading this over and over a long time ago, my ex cheated, on me and i didn't even cry. Funny thing is I knew he cheated on me. I thought it was funny actually.

Reviews

[nono]

I like it a lot and the poem is about something that we all want to know when we like someone.

[Taylor H.]

I love the colors. I also love the emotion in this. Great job. Maybe some of the rhymes felt forced, but you can fix that.

[jose]

nice poem. I could feel the emotions coming from this, and i know how you feel. Poetry is a great way to let things off your chest. It's great to vent your feelings through. I like this poem a lot.