Do you really love me?

This is something I have felt for the longest time. I was finally able to vent it out.

Why can’t you just see.
All The pain it’s causing me.
Maybe we were never meant to be.

You do everything with her but very little with me.
Just Take one look at my heart.
And See all the bloody scars.
You snuggle and play with her.
But do what with me?

Maybe you shouldn’t see the scars.
For all the wounds have been broken through.
Once fully healed now reopened like a painful memory.
Maybe we were never meant to be.
My scars would give you nightmares, like a Dog to a cat.

You healed my heart and ripped it apart.
Why do you talk to her, and never talk to me.
Just leave these wounded scars open and never, heal them back.
Just leave, me to die and never take a look back.

One time I thought you wanted to spend time with me.
But then you talk all about her.
I’m sick of it I want to end it.
Just leave me the f**k alone.
If you loved me.
You’d spend time with me.
So it comes to this.
Do you really love me?
Because I really Love you.                                                                                                

Author's Note

This is something I feel and I need to get off my chest, but i wrote this along long time ago, back in like 2009, lolz no worries. I'm fine now. Hehe I like reading this over and over a long time ago, my ex cheated, on me and i didn't even cry. Funny thing is I knew he cheated on me. I thought it was funny actually.

Reviews

[Sara Mercury]

Yes, you vented well, and writing is always a good way to vent all the frustrations in one's soul. (In the future, if a guy appears to like someone over you, don't waste your time - just move on to someone who does show you the attention you rightly deserve. It's what I do, and it works. You can make it so you never have to hurt again.)

[Steve]

Very nice vent honey.......

I could sense so much honesty and emotion here.......

[Mary Evans]

As context and depth of emotion its great. As poem style, unless its free verse, i don't really see a definite one. The flow is good but the whole thing is closer to lyrics than to a poem. I don't know it might be just me since my knowledge in poetry is really limited. I just don't see a consequent flow and i think for lyrics it sounds great but as a poem its not really consistent.

[HappyTaylor]

Wow. This is really emotional and VERY good. I feel like I know how you feel. (Definately about the lecturing....I hate it when guys do that....) But besides that, I hope that boy soon realizes what he has and takes it, and drops that other girl..... Good luck hun. :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

It is great to throw all your feelings and emotions on paper, it's what most of my poems are about, so I know it helps. I really do. (: This is a great write.

[Daydreamer54]

ITt;s always good to put your feelings down on paper becuz you feel better afterwards. I wish 4 u the best!!! :)

[KaySea]

this is so incredible. nice work. keep it up.

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Nice-you really expressed your
pissed off-frustration & anger-
-this is such a great emotive poem...

...I love it...

james:-)

[J.S. Pua]

nice..
an emotive write..
many can relate to this..
hmm..
the colors made it less sincere, i think..
but that's just me..
still..
good work..

[Joshua Donahue]

so emotional and poses the big question for most females out there. a nice piece!