Prologue

How everything began to Snowfire

In the Beginning there were dragons. Dragons created mankind, they rolled mud between there paws and blew fire from there snouts creating man. The Dragon that led all other dragons created woman by taking flesh, blood, and bones from the mans side and making it into a woman figure.
    Men and Women over the years moved to all parts of the world claiming territories, building castles and other things such as carts, buildings, etc. There was one kind of “man” that dragons didn’t make, the gods made such beautiful, intelligent creatures. Elves, such beautiful creatures, had flawless bodies and faces, there voices so beautiful, sounding  like an angels whisper.
    They have created cities of gold where the dragons have been living with them as there pets and companions, but over the years the Humans have gone to war with the Elves. The Dragons have all died, except one. The human king has the Last dragon known as Fenrir. He has feared the Elves would make a comeback and kill him. He has hired assassins to kill the Elvin king.  One day the Dragons will come back, with the elves by there side.

Author's Note

ignore grammar and spelling problems, what do you think. It was hot when I made it and I couldn't think. I'm sorry.

Reviews

[Nik Dendera]

I'd maybe indulge a bit more. What you've got is good, it's got everything there, but make it a bit deeper. It seems like you've thought it all out but haven't got it all down.

Its a very good start, though. I don't read fantasy, but you've clearly got the makings of something good.

[E. L. Foley]

Nice legend-like style. It'll be even better once you clean up the problems you mentioned. :D

[Daydreamer54]

The intro was nice, kinda rushed, but it seems promising! ^-^

[Brandon]

its really good i think you did a great job and its a 5 star poem keep up the good work makayla :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

I like it girl. It's pretty good, I think this will create a good book. (: