These days burn

How can i get you to see

Your own tragedy

Your torment

Going insane

Im so torn now

Between this pain

And your pleasure

This distance is killing me

Fighting to breath

Breathing to fight

I will never break

Would you like it?

Im so torn between

My pain

And your pleasure

As another day

Burns away

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad, but check your grammar. I think the end of this piece is especially poignant and you've definitely managed to get your point across. Well done.

[DarkRomance]

Thank you :)