This Girl That I Once Knew

I let you create your own interpretation ^_^

She plays in the shadow of the moon

This girl that I once knew

She sings the words of a butterfly

and cries the tears only angels cry

She swims in iridescent water

Not once does she ever falter

She carries her heart in hand

and believes that life is grand

She wears clothes of silver

From spring until December

She who knows no right

and somehow retains all light

She stirs clouds with wings

on hope and of her dreams

She worries none and few

This girl that I once knew

Reviews

[therin]

Oh, to be more like this girl that you once knew! She sounds amazing, just light and sunshine.

I know someone just like her.

I love the first paragraph. Those four lines are amazing. They capture this little shiny bubble of a person, like a small sun, an ideal. But it's also the way you play with phrases, for instance "she worries none and few".

Love the way my brain assumes she must be young, because an adult couldn't possibly be so carefree and clear.

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you very much. I'm glad The girl that I once knew is your friend as well ^_^

[Michael X]

beautifully written, touching and flows with a dreamy quality to ponder,
a reflection of life and desires, the form brings the words to whispered life

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

And would this little girl be the little you? Dreamlike, tender, loving, and to me a tribute to the inner child. Just my take. :)

[Serenity Faith]

0.o......you're good.....

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

She's still there...mine is. :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Your imagery is a dream. I found this poem to be very lyrical.
I could hear it as a song.

[Skye]

Your description are so beautiful and your words, with them I imagine I'm floating in a sea of blue and silver, watching the girl while she flys. Lovely poem.

[Alana McGuire]

This is really pretty. It makes you long to know the girl, to witness her beauty first-hand. Very lovely write :)