Arguing With The Heavens

I look to the heavens,

and ask God why

Must these clouds,

mock my eyes

I'm ignored at first,

as the sky falls down

releasing it's tears

upon my crown.

The sky opens up,

did it hear my cry

Instead it yells back,

a thunderous reply

I keep my pace,

in the pouring rain

while the heavens call,

out all my pain

act as you do,

be that way

instead of offering,

a brighter day

I'm hurt, i'm sad,

I'm angry too

why Heaven's I ask,

what happened to you

The heavens pause,

for quite some time

a penny for its thoughts,

then it begins to shine

I smile to myself,

no need to disagree

you are only you

and I am only me

Reviews

[Shauna Jacqueline Ander..]

You seem to like using weather as imagery which does suggest that you yourself are quite emotional, definately an advantage which shows through your work. You have a gift with words, work to perfect and one day you could do anything.

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you very much. And yes, I do have quite a bit of emotion. It does help when I'm writing though. I find that I express things better when I feel them personally, whether I be sad, happy, or angry.