Ruin Me

One day girl, there'll be a guy who ruins your lipstick, not your mascara.

Please take this broken heart of mine

Down from it's dusty shelf

And with it take all the cries

The callings out for help

Im sorry that I'm no good

I do not deal well with hurt

Its simply just I've come to terms

That love is a foreign word

Dont be so ridiculous

As to underestimate my ache

This me with a happy smile

Is surely soon to fade

He smiles ever so nicely

A blush upon my cheek

Girl I will ruin you

Be wary in your dreams

Im scared now of sleeping

But it seems I've met defeat

As I close my eyes so slowly

Drifting into the deep

And there you are boy

Waiting there for me

Just like I knew you would

Prepared for the ruining

Im called over and pulled close

Makeup running down my face

Ah now thats no good

Here now, as I ruin this

And his lips touch mine

And he tangles my hair

And he tells me of love

And he ruins my fear

Yes, he ruins me

Taking away my guard

So I can love again, 

Ruins me, by fixing my heart.

Author's Note

The inspiration for this one came from the quote in the description. I came across it on facebook, and it made me ever so hopeful and ever so inspired. So tell me what you think ^_^ and above all, enjoy!

Reviews

[Writergurl]

Yes, he ruins me
Taking away my guard
So I can love again,
Ruins me, by fixing my heart.

love your closing stanza, amazing poem here

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice set-up of words and thoughts.
"Yes, he ruins me
Taking away my guard
So I can love again,
Ruins me, by fixing my heart."
I like the ending. Thank you for sharing your amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Laura Harrison]

I loved the pleasant surprise at the end! What a lovely poem :)

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

I enjoyed this read...

well done, keep it up :)

[John]

Took a different turn then I expected it to. That's good, I like to be kept guessing.

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

Yes, he ruins me
Taking away my guard
So I can love again,
Ruins me, by fixing my heart.


This is an astonishing piece of art, I have had to read it a few times to absorb. It takes you one a different journey each time, fabulous!!

[Sam Gregory]

Vivid imagery here, you told a story of love effectively. A nice read :)

[Pax]

lovely dear friend... a healing start to an endearing end... i enjoyed this piece, great work!

[An owl on the moon]

Smiled and smiled more... to see such a beautiful glimpse of love... it truly can bring summer to the soul... May it be, dear poet... may any pain you've suffered truly be washed away so you can love and be loved always and ever.