Oh Me Oh My

Song

~chorus~

Pretty girl

Handsome man

Oh me oh my

Is this the end?

Untamed eyes

Moonlit night

A moan and sigh

Is this all right?

~end of chorus~

I'm fading fastly

I'm losing breath

your words are capturing

all that I have left

There's no escaping

that mysterious smile

this tempted child

asked to play a while

Well hold me tightly

and please don't let go

the spell you've cast

makes me love you so

Dressed in your touch

an angel's kiss

who would've thought

it'd come to this

~chorus~

Oh pretty girl

Handsome man

Oh me oh my

Is this the end?

Untamed eyes

Moonlit night

A moan and sigh

Is this all right?

~repeat chrous once more~

Take my hand

lead me into the stars

for now and ever

this world is ours

Forever running

from the morning light

strong desires

are hidden from sight

In this darkened place

you hold the key to my heart

neither death nor time

will tear us apart

I'm completely caught 

by the spider and its web

like a puppet on strings

held by love's thick thread

~chorus~

Yeah pretty girl

Handsome Man

Oh me oh my

Is this the end?

Untamed eyes

Moonlit night

A moan and sigh

Is this all right?

~repeat chorus~

Pretty girl

Handsome man

Oh me oh my

Is this the end?

Untamed eyes

Moonlit night

A moan and sigh

Is this all right?

Author's Note

Ok so this was my first attempt at writing a FULL song.(Not exactly the greatest song I know, but the way it sounds in my mind is awesome!) Still unsure on the title, so welcome new suggestions. I'm also debating on whether or not I should put up a video with it of how it sings in my head, but because I don't really feel like I'm a good singer AT ALL...that's still a debate. I might have a friend sing it for me or something I don't know....anywho, reviews are greatly appreciated ^_^ Hope you like it!

Reviews

[quarintine_deathangel]

It's an interesting song but the whole point went over my head. Maybe you could replace just one chorus into two chorus' and narrate a little detail into it. Not that there isn't enough already. It just sounds a little broad and unspecified. You can choose on whether or not you want to do that. I could hear the song playing. There is a rythm and it's clear. It's a nice start but there's additions and upgrades that would completely amp the song if you did them ^.< Good Job! Thanks for writing!

[Cole Hayley]

I like the addition of chorus's , the stanzas really have that feel to it, like it could be a song the ending stanza is my favorite, a aftertaste of the poem .

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Great song, Emily. Very catchy.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Groovy :)

[That_Girl]

I'm impressed! The rhymes flow smoothly and the content is solid. YES! Please post a video!!! :D

[Poetic Beauty]

I like the words of this song. It is like a love that shouldn't be but you just can't let it go. The feelings just won't die.

[Aehr]

nice song.. i love the chorus.. and please do put up a video! :)

[Pax]

wow,...a song...really beautiful..what a lovely imagery...you should sing it...or your friend.. it really depends on you...i would love to listen to the melody if you finish it... Great first attempt...

[Lost in Wonderland]

oh emily I loved it! I sang it a I read haha, and I would lve to see a video! Nice job, nice emotions and imagery! Great job

[Serenity Faith]

Thanks Mickey ^_^ You always make me smile

[Lost in Wonderland]

yay, glad I could:)