Oh Me Oh My

Song

~chorus~

Pretty girl

Handsome man

Oh me oh my

Is this the end?

Untamed eyes

Moonlit night

A moan and sigh

Is this all right?

~end of chorus~

I'm fading fastly

I'm losing breath

your words are capturing

all that I have left

There's no escaping

that mysterious smile

this tempted child

asked to play a while

Well hold me tightly

and please don't let go

the spell you've cast

makes me love you so

Dressed in your touch

an angel's kiss

who would've thought

it'd come to this

~chorus~

Oh pretty girl

Handsome man

Oh me oh my

Is this the end?

Untamed eyes

Moonlit night

A moan and sigh

Is this all right?

~repeat chrous once more~

Take my hand

lead me into the stars

for now and ever

this world is ours

Forever running

from the morning light

strong desires

are hidden from sight

In this darkened place

you hold the key to my heart

neither death nor time

will tear us apart

I'm completely caught 

by the spider and its web

like a puppet on strings

held by love's thick thread

~chorus~

Yeah pretty girl

Handsome Man

Oh me oh my

Is this the end?

Untamed eyes

Moonlit night

A moan and sigh

Is this all right?

~repeat chorus~

Pretty girl

Handsome man

Oh me oh my

Is this the end?

Untamed eyes

Moonlit night

A moan and sigh

Is this all right?

Author's Note

Ok so this was my first attempt at writing a FULL song.(Not exactly the greatest song I know, but the way it sounds in my mind is awesome!) Still unsure on the title, so welcome new suggestions. I'm also debating on whether or not I should put up a video with it of how it sings in my head, but because I don't really feel like I'm a good singer AT ALL...that's still a debate. I might have a friend sing it for me or something I don't know....anywho, reviews are greatly appreciated ^_^ Hope you like it!

Reviews

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

I like each verse, it keeps the tempo and the chorus seems like it would be a fun chorus to sing with. Very nice attempt, keep on trucking.

[leanna]

way to go! i love it!

[Colt 45 & 9/16]

good structure! What kind of feel does the song have.? Is it swinging and romantic? somber and folksy. Definitely post a link to some sung/spoken version of the lyrics (No matter how rough) as long as you or the singer is comfortable with it. Or at least some song names that you take inspiration for parts of the song. I chord progression idea would be awesome too if you could too. Good Stuff!!

[TheLastEclipse]

I'm okay with this. It has the emotional structure and the song structure. All it needs is music and LOVE lol
I did enjoy it being a musician myself I can see what you're aiming for... Or at least I think I can ;)
98/100

[Jack...]

Personally I think the title fits the lyircs nicely. It would be nice to hear the melody. I now what you mean when it sounds awesome in your head...keep singing.

[dan nacario]

nice song..

[Rhianne Ney]

It's hard to write the song but yes you can do it!

[Fréyjä Helv..]

You're a natural... I liked it... :)

[Irvette Dauphine]

like this song :D
want to find it at youtube~ >.>

[Adam Faison]

Great song, one that I would listen to if it was made into one!