A Random Rant of Love

I remember so clearly, 

the day that we met. 

My love you'll always have, 

that you can bet. 

You tried to steal my heart, 

but I'd already given it to you.

I want you to know, 

that has always been true.

You tried to steal a kiss, 

that didn't go so swell, 

and who would've thought, 

I'd end up giving that as well.

You made me so mad, 

with all of your tricks and your teasing. 

I was always so unsure, 

maybe you thought it was pleasing?

One minute you'd be mean, 

the next hug me from behind.

It seemed our feelings, 

were always in a bind.

You sat with me once, 

and watched the sky fall down.

Our fates our souls, 

they've always been bound.

Well take a look now my love, 

our family and our child. 

My gosh and you still, 

somehow drive my heart wild.

I love you more, 

as each day goes by,

even more after these years, 

through each smile and sigh 

My one and only dearest, 

please know we are together, 

lifetime and eternity, 

always and forever.

Author's Note

I'm still trying to write a good love poem, for some reason I'm just not good at them >.<

Reviews

[Patrick Henry]

I Love it, but what is REALLY nice, is watching you post and write as if keeping a diary of sorts...... if you were to keep writing and as you say, "get better at writing love poems". This poem is so sweet and it seems that every Love poem is incredibly short when it's enjoyed!! They could go for days... lol I am an incredible fan of YOURS as well as your poems, so reading anything of yours is awesome fun. Even with the circumstances, this poem pays wonderful tribute..... : ) xoxox -Your Mark

[Samoda]

loved the rhyming scheme, and a very fitting title
good job

[Rhianne Ney]

I love it though
100/100

[Pax]

its a love poem for me, the reality of love. fights is just a part of it.
this is really sweet.

[Adam Faison]

You say you are not good at writing love poems, but this is a perfect example of a great love poem. Great as always!