First Kiss

The memory of a first kiss...

Two young hearts

walked to the same beat

with interlaced fingers

in cool fall heat

We counted the pieces

as the sky fell down

you asked me to be yours

sweet breath on my crown

"Of course" was my answer

we are true loves

as stars dotted the ceiling

to the song of turtle doves

A back alley we crept

your skateboard in hand

which became the seat

of our passion's first stand

I smile to myself now

as we still live in bliss

when I think those years back

to our very first kiss

Author's Note

A poem I thought of the other day, when I was thinking about mine and my Husband's first kiss ^_^

Reviews

[Benjamin Wright]

My real first kiss was when I was about seven years old. I had a crush on a girl in my class, and she knew it. After a few months, I went up to her (remind you, I was a kid and didn't really know what I was doing it for), and planted a kiss on her. At first, I thought she was gonna slap me or punch me so hard that I would end up at the nurse's office. But instead, she actually kissed me back. And we remained good friends until we reach high school. But later, I moved and never saw her again. But that was my real and most memorable kiss I had. Even to this day, I still reflect on where she may be, and wondering if she is now married and has a family of her own.

[Serenity Faith]

First off...AWWWWWWWW! Secondly, thank you for sharing such a sweet story! You were definitely braver than most seven year olds. There are some people like that in our lives. They, for some reason, have an impact on us, and we never forget them.

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

This poem is so amazing and beautiful! I love it!
100/100

[Serenity Faith]

Thanks so much for the awesome review ^_^

[.]

Beautiful :) I am very happy for you :)

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you ^_^

[Owlgirl]

That's so sweet! Aww!

[Serenity Faith]

^_^

[Myra]

What a sweet memory! I can just see it =]

[Serenity Faith]

It's one of my favorites ^_^ Thank you.

[Yheela]

So sweet and innocent.
Love it!

[Serenity Faith]

Sweet and innocent were the best times ^_^

[Yheela]

11 years down the line with my hubby I sometimes long for sweet and innocent. ^_^
But now we have a deep, steady love that I really wouldn't give up for anything.

[Serenity Faith]

I completely understand, though I'm not as far as you are. My Husband stole my heart, my first real kiss, and everything after that 7 years ago my Freshman year in high school. We now have a wonderful 3 year old daughter and are about to hit 8 years together this September. Though we only got married this past April xD

[Yheela]

We got married less than a year after we first got together, many thought us too young (21), said it would never last.
Proved them wrong now, didn't we?! ^_^

[John Alexander McFadyen]

I hope you are not together to prove a point. My second marriage lasted 16 years!!!

[Yheela]

lol
No, that would be stupid. As far as I know we'll be together for life. That's my plan and I'm sticking to it.

[Serenity Faith]

I completely agree, and we were told the same. As i met him just a few months before my fifteenth birthday. Though we're still together and just as in love as we were when we were teenagers.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You two hold on to that as it is so precious!!!!

[Relic]

Very well written with good rhymes. Some memories last a lifetime.

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you for the kind words ^_^ I hope to never lose some memories, others I would be okay with if they slipped off the edges of my mind and out of my thoughts forever

[Relic]

I know very well what you mean there. LOL and you're welcome.

[Lost in Wonderland]

Awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!! Emily that was so incredibly sweet, brought a smile to my face:) well written and lovely imagery! Loved it!!

[Lost in Wonderland]

( you should enter this in my warm, love poems contest;)

[Serenity Faith]

Will do ^_^ I'm glad you liked it Mickey!