Do You Love Me?

Do you love me?

and all my faults?

I'm childish at times

and stubborn too

I can be indecisive

and I can misconstrue

I'm very self-conscious

and often naive

I'm ditzy sometimes

and considered a peeve

Are you sure you love me?

The more you know?

I'm becoming worried

I'm sure it will show

I'm not always right

I try not to be wrong

Maybe I'm weak

but I wish I was strong

 I know I'm not exactly

the brightest crayon

more often than none

I'm very withdrawn

But I am my own person

despite my mistakes

They're something I'm sure

that anyone could make

On the bright side of

my dark moon shell

I'm an awesome cook

and I can sew as well

I can cheer you up

with just one smile

I give decent advice

if you listen a while

I have a huge heart

with lots of love to give

I want you to have it

if my flaws you'll forgive

Do you love me?

and all that I am?

....

Reviews

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Great poem, Emily:) I love the structure of this poem. It is so beautiful:)

[Chris]

A taste of innocence, and a wish to be wanted... very girl-next-door-ish in a gentle and nice way.

[Lost in Wonderland]

This was such a sweet and lovely poem that was written very honestly! Well done:)

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you so much ^_^

[Lost in Wonderland]

no problem:)

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

You are just a pearl...your words are so beautiful ...every man would have be happy to have you as his ultimate love...I know I would :-)

[Serenity Faith]

You're such a sweetie ^_^ Thank you

[Mellisa]

Very well written. I really feel the meaning behind the poem.

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you ^_^

[Skye]

This is one of my favorites by you yet, I adore it so much.

[Serenity Faith]

Woot! ^_^ Thanks Skye

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

Excellent. I love this. I too many words no way to say them. This is perfect. Fantastic write.

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you so much ^_^