I'm Something

Second part to I'm Nothing...

turning around the curve 

I'm driving

touching the air in the sky

I'm soaring

opening eyes to life's wonders

I'm glowing

falling asleep from darkness

I'm living

waking up to the sun

I'm praying

no more wounds or cares

I'm laughing

snuggled in your arms

I'm sighing

puppet strings snap away

I'm leaping

feeling, breathing, being

I'm Something

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Androglossia]

This is recovery. This is when after life's torments, a person is able to see the brighter side of life.

This poem illuminates the realm of inner healing where our burdens, pain and unresolved issues is released.

Like the first one, this is an amazing piece.

[Serenity Faith]

Very true Maryanne, and thank you for taking the time to read them both, I appreciate it ^_^

[Owlgirl]

Wow! This is great! My only editorial comments are that in the fifth line it should be "opening eyes to life's wonders", and you may want to change the line "I'm praying" because not all readers are religious, but that one is a personal preference and leaving the line as-is, the whole thing is beautiful and melodic. Great job!

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you very much, I actually had a bit of trouble with that line. I didn't think it sounded right at first either >.< I'll fix it now, again Thank you ^_^

[Owlgirl]

lol you're welcome! :)

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very nicely written

[Skye]

Simply amazing. I love this!

[afra]

wowooowwwww ...amazing ...i loved it ...good job

[Serenity Faith]

Thanks so much Afra! ^_^

[afra]

welcome