I'm Nothing

The first part to a two part poem...the second part....I'm Something

sliding into the curve of the road

I'm crashing

hitting the edge only to hit air

I'm falling

closing eyes to an ill fated life 

I'm fading

waking up to a painful reality

I'm dreaming

looking to the stars in the night

I'm wishing

take away all my fears and pain

I'm pleading

a heart to an unseen love

I'm calling

chains binding a slave

I'm crawling

freedom to be

I'm nothing

Author's Note

Trying something different....tell me what ya think ^_^

Reviews

[Fréyjä Helv..]

Everyone goes through the same thing... It's life as we say it. What happens next only depends on what we're gonna do about it... No matter where you go, there will always be a checkpoint of misery on the way... We just have to deal with it... A beautiful poem it is... Nice work...

[Adam Faison]

This is like what we all go through in life; thinking these things. But then there are the good thinkings like in your poem I'm Something. Love this approach with this poem and your I'm Something poem. Great write!

[DalainaRenee]

Very deep within thought with this piece! Enjoyable read! :)

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you! ^_^

[zainul]

Enjoyed reading twice.
Tells about action and reaction of life activities.
Lovely write.

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you Zainul ^_^ I'm thrilled you like it so much.

[zainul]

You are welcome,sweet friend.
I will read the other part soon.

[The Jay]

The ending has rendered me speechless. YOU ARE FREAKING GOOD! Brilliant.

P.S. This is your second poem that I am reading, and it is also going in my favourites library.

[Serenity Faith]

Thank you so much ^_^ I enjoy your work as well from what I've read so far. I truly appreciate your kindness.

Very deep, dark and depressing piece. But that doesn't subtract from the beautiful way that you wrote it. I really love the way you italicized some of the lines. It really added to the theatrics of reading it.

[cynthiabuhainbaello]

The format is prolific although the subject is quite depressing and spiraling downwards, bringing an emptiness of mood. A good form, effective in its theme.

[Olivia Marie]

It was great, I enjoyed reading it :)

[♪The Girl Next Do..]

I think it was awesome!!! You go girl!

[Hope]

I loved it. that is realy all I can say it was just that good.

[Serenity Faith]

^_^ You make me smile Hope, Thank you!

[Hope]

I try lol , and no problem it was true