Technically......

Technically......

A Poem by Serenity Faith
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A funny poem that came to mind, whilst I was sleep deprived.

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Roses are red
They're pink and yellow too
Violets aren't usually violet
so why aren't they called blue?

Sugar is sweet, I must agree
though isn't that something you savor?
I don't think I'd ever taste you, but
your personality I don't disfavor!

Forgive me if this wasn't the poem
you originally wished to hear
I guess I got a little technical
technically.....

"I love you" is what should be made clear ^_^

© 2012 Serenity Faith


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like this poem.. this is sweet XD

Posted 12 Years Ago


Haha very technical but written in a fairly simple way.. that messes with the head if thought about too much lol. lol keep it up

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great and well written! Really like your work!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serenity Faith

12 Years Ago

thanks so much Adam
:DD This is amazing, and adorable, the ending is perfect!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serenity Faith

12 Years Ago

Thank you Skye
This is cute and wonderful

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serenity Faith

12 Years Ago

Thank you
Short sweet and brought a smile to my face thats enough for me to like it.


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serenity Faith

12 Years Ago

I'm glad it made you smile ^_^ That's what it's meant for.

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Added on July 7, 2012
Last Updated on July 7, 2012
Tags: funny, silly, humorous

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Serenity Faith
Serenity Faith

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