Secret Held Within

Secret Held Within

 

I am in love with someone who does not love me back.

Does she not know that for her, I will make ends meet?

For her, I would recreate Heaven on Earth, just for her?

 

Does she not see what is directly in her face?

In her plain sight? If my love for her were as noticeable as a stop sign, she’d stop to realize that my love for her is growing by the day.

 

Even though I do not have the pleasure of seeing her face everyday, I paint a picture of her in my head, in the anticipation of seeing the real thing once we meet again?

I do not suppress my love for her, I shout it aloud to the world.

I wear it on both of my sleeves.

 

I love her so much that it hurts my soul that she does not know of my hurting love.

If I were to die at this moment, as my pen is running across this paper, I would die in vain.

For she would not know of how much I love her.

 

I am confounded that she does not know of my secret.

Hopefully, in some time or another, she will learn of my secret.

Reviews

[BlessedLove]

I like this. Especially because I'm going thru the very same emotion...well the lack of its recognition....great write!

[MagiCrystal]

Mirage...this is so simple I love pieces like this one.. Humble..! magic

[Akash]

Nice angle and complete improvisation of the plot.
Its a myriad of emotions conveyed in little words.
A good work....

Hugs
-akash-

[just is]

This is a heartfelt write here and very well written.

[Butterflymom]

Heartfelt, and very well expressed!

[---]

I know what its like to have someone oblivious to adoration.

I really love the last two lines

Great writing!

~Phoenix~

[Mason Vail]

Hurts, doesn't it?
:)
Mmmm... the secret you don't want kept...
I especially appreciated the line: "I wear it on both of my sleeves."
Been there.

[Frank F. Atanacio]

A combined effort that had the magical flow of a love poem that yearns.. it was done with a clean crisp flow :) Thank you Frank