Essay

just a quick draft, please review. ive been thinking about this quiet a while now. I made it like you were thinking in my head. lets see if im not just rambling!!

Thought:
 did you know, how small the chance is that we are alive?

 work with me, you should tell me when im wrong, or just rambling QQ

Answer:
 Lol, but your right. It is a small chance we are alive. We search for that truth our whole lives

Thought:
 but thats not my point
 someone needs 2 parents to be alive,
 those parents have 2 parents
 those parents need two parents
 then you have wars, epidemics, natur disasters, etc etc
 and those billion of grand- grand - grand etc etc parents
 that were walking around, they didnt even die
 the billion os grand grand grand grand parents that lived,
 those billion people that lived
 not one of them died
 'there fore you excist
 while epidemics like the plague, black death, crisis, pirates, napoleon, first and second world war etc etc
 excisted
 not one of those billion for fathers never died

Answer:
 Its small yeah.  But there's a reason they didn't die.

Thought:
 if I dont believe in faith and karma
 i mean probably, with chance calculated, 1o of them were a drunk, 20 of them were uncurable sick, and 15 of them wanted to die
 and still they didnt
 therefore we live
 though they fought against each other, they were sick etc etc
Answer:
 I don't know
Thought
 you know, sometimes i could have a talk with god, karma, jezus, jaweh, or who else is running the show
 and i would like to know the point
 because statisticly, everyone who is alive,
 shouldnt be!
Answer
 I don't think about it. Cause there is no answer. I just know I'm alive, there's a reason for it, and so I live.
Thought
 but because there is a reason?
 should we do it?
 there is a reason we love? do we follow?
 there is a reason to pay taxes? do we do that?
 there is a reason to eat? do we eat?
 there is a reason to respect? do we respect?
 there is a reason to study/ do we study?
 there is a reason to make kids? do we make kids?
 there is a reason we cant make kids? do you defy this? or stay with this reason you dont know?
 there is a reason we cant overcome this all? do we defy this?
 there is a reason for war,
 do we agree?
 who says, that reason is a good enough reason?
 who can agree, or disagree, without knowing the reasons?
 without knowing the argument
 and how can you disagree, without knowing who you could disagree with

And here I'm stuck, dont mind the grammar please, this is just a quick draft of my way of thinking.

Author's Note

Hey guys, please help me out, i came to a point in live, where it all doesnt make any sense anymore, my home is gone, school is new, and everything doesnt make sense, so just please read this, and give me your ideas

Reviews

[Dove]

Woah, this is seriously interesting and now its making me think lol. Its very creative and you have a unique way of writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

The damns rules and laws make us do most of the things in this poem.
"there is a reason we love? do we follow?
there is a reason to pay taxes? do we do that?
there is a reason to eat? do we eat?
there is a reason to respect? do we respect?
there is a reason to study/ do we study? "
I believe laws and rules have overtook the world. Forced classes to take in school which will never be needed. Laws for everything. Paying taxes for what. Each day more Government are going under. Your thoughts could go on forever. Many questions and very few answers. Some days I want to roan away. Live in the forest. Create my own world. Thank you for the excellent essay. Made me think.
Coyote

[Luke Sampson]

This very different from your other writes. I think instead of focussing on the general reason for things, start refining it to you. Maybe start down scaling it in a step-like way eg. you are looking at the worlds' view --> then look at maybe a certain culture --> then a certain group/following --> then people you know etc etc until you find your reason? But don't let the thought drag, try and give it some momentum.

[Thea]

Hmm, it's creative...Very unique style of writing a piece...Brilliant idea, Black...
And, I agree with Yas, you should search for something for it to have sense...
Great poem! :)))

[Jeremy Baker]

Quite different from anything else I've read, which just adds to the pleasure of reading it. Stream-of-consciousness is a hard style of writing to do, but you do it rather well. Good writing!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Nothing ever makes sense..unless u search for it...although that can make one go insane/mad...thinking about the universe...what it all means etc....

so u have to make your own way..read books on religion...visit mosques/temples etc etc...see if u get some divine inspiration...can happen!!!

great to read this :)

[BrynnaW.]

I am not sure as to where you need help or what you need help with. If you have any questions (this had a ton) ask me and I will gladly answer. This was very interesting and got me thinking within this thinking. Hahaha :) Very confusing. I enjoyed this. Good job and keep on writing.

[Wandering Violet]

Kind of like this! Weird but clever.