Chapter 33

Chapter 33

A Chapter by Black

''Kathy! Are you okay? What are you up too? I didn't hear any music. So I came to check. '' Lizzy says.


I look at the room anxiously, but there is nothing to be seen any more. Just the curtains that are waving in the wind that caught them.


''It is my room. Stay off it, unless you're invited.'' I say with a mad tone in my voice.


How could I ever belong here, if my privacy was always violated? I couldn't ever belong here anyway could I? Maybe I should sniff around sometime?


''Okay, I will go already.'' Lizzy says. For some reason she looks kind of hurt, but as soon as I think that, it disappears.


Must have made that up, I think. I see Lizzy leave the room and hear her walk downstairs. I pick up my guitar again, but not feeling in the right mood to play. Why, I never lost the ability to play the guitar.


Sigh, life is just horrible. You always end up alone, just all alone. Though Christopher seems nice. He makes me smile. Like my brothers always made me laugh.


Victor and Steven, I miss them, they were both 5 year older then me. They were twins no one could ever separate the two of them. They looked so alike. Except me off course I could keep them apart. I lost them in the war too. Just a half year ago, and my parents promised me it wouldn't happen to them.


No! Don't think about that. I would drive myself crazy over it. I have to get out of here.


I look out of the window, but Christopher took away the ladder. Why the hell did he do that? Now I have no where to go. I can't go downstairs.


I sit down on bed, and start thinking about my family again. I try to hold my tears, but thinking about my family and nothing to do leaves me in tears.


No, I’m not going to just sit around.


I walk to the room, it is just two stories high. I look at the ground and climb halfway out of the window.


''Don't you dare little bee!'' I hear a voice say. Like it is whispered in my ears.



© 2011 Black


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I love how her father's voice is always with her, haunting her. Now we're starting to uncover the mysteries of Kathy's past, and why she is so cold and distant towards others. Well done, I'm interested to see where she goes next! Will she indeed sneak out and climb out the window?

MORE. NOW.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Interesting chapter nice..

Posted 13 Years Ago


Love how it ends, and the glimpse of her past you hint around the beginning with her brothers. I like these, I hope you continue writing ^ ^

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hm, I like how it ends. Still makes me want to read more. And a little glimpse into her past. I like it


Posted 13 Years Ago


I think it's either Andrew or Chris, a nice cliffhanger. I want to know what's going to happen! Please write more. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice cliffhanger ending!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


:o Leave!!! :) Keep on writing! I want more!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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