Chapter 30

Chapter 30

A Chapter by Black

He sees my stumbling, and trying to find my words. I must look like an idiot.


''Haha, don't worry Kathy.'' he says with a wide smile.


His wide smile is like a radiant and most sympathetic smile I ever saw. It reaches into his vivid grey eyes. They are lit up like candles. His blond short hair makes him look like a charming prince. His short nose and chin make him look like a Greek god. Without any flaws in his face, neither in his body.

His arms were big, especially the biceps. They were able to protect someone. His length was certainly a head taller then me. Which made him even more attractive. Why did I always fall for the tall guys?


Wait, what am I doing. Thinking about falling for him?


I try to smile back but it comes out as a worried smile.


''Really Kathy. I’m not going to bite!'' Christopher says.


''Now let me take you home. Before something happens along the way. No girl should be running around in the dark at 1 am!''


I can't help but think that he is to late for taking care of that, but it would be nice to have an excuse of coming late... but no. That wouldn't really be fair.


He takes my arm around his arm and drags me along.



'' No excuses this time Kathy. Your smile already looks painfully.'' he says while laughing out loud.


Wow, he has a nice laugh. I can't help but laugh too.


''Now my fair lady joins me in this night. I should elaborate about myself or I’m just like any other stranger. My name is Christopher. Oh wait, I already told you that, didn't I? Well, anyway. My name is Christopher Masters. I'm 18 year old. I live next door. Wait, I already told you that too.


He starts laughing again and I again can't help but to laugh along. Wow. I really didn't feel this great since, well, since a while.


''Oh well, what next. Oh, don't be mocking me!'' He says playfully.


We laugh together and turn around the corner of our houses.


''Kathy Bloom. How dare you!'' My aunt says.


''Oh, and you Christopher. I should have known.'' she follows.


oh...oh...




© 2011 Black


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Indeed, uh-oh. What's going to happen?! I'm reading on, very interesting. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice chapter nice conclution indeed thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think you mean uh-oh. Loved it! What happens next?! Write more! :) Keep on writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A nice introduction for Christopher. Sort of tells you a little about his character and how he acts without giving too much stuff away. Still makes us want to hear more. Nicely done. You know how to end chapters in a way that makes us want to keep reading more:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Busted!

Is it me or has the "I should have known" some deeper meaning to it? Does she know something about Christopher? Does he have a history? Looks promising!

Keep on writing

Posted 13 Years Ago



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