Strength

The strength I seek,

Is no where near,

timeless days of shedding tears,

the support is gone,

the failed thrives,

leaving me with an unsettled feeling,

of an accustomed to high price,

The strength I seek,

can't be bought,

can't be purchased,

can't just be,

You need a friend,

a lover,

or maybe someday

the strength will be in me!

That day,

I will praise,

no more feeling relentless,

no more hiding fears or tear stains

Reviews

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Lovely and strong indeed....

[Thea]

"That day,
I will praise,
no more feeling relentless,
no more hiding fears or tear stains"

I love the ending, Black!!! Thumbs up! Excellent poem! :)))

[Desmund Tiny]

I like it... well written. I love the third stanza... ^^,

[nevermindfan1991]

This was wonderful and well written. It seemed very despondent but yet strong because of the emotion that you were able to express. I must confess when I first read this I wasn't sure what it was about it. But I tried to actively read it to understand. I've been there, I felt weak and hopeless. But don't worry you always have someone to lean on. Great Job!

[BrynnaW.]

A very wonderful, well written poem. I thought it was perfect. I really loved it. Good job! Keep on writing!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A perfect piece,

The strength I seek,
can't be bought,
can't be purchased,
can't just be

speaks everything so well indeed :)

[Rae]

Very nice. It's simplicity really makes it relatable to a broad and diverse group of readers. Keep writing!!

[amdc101]

All your poems are really interesting to read because there is always something new that they are about. Great job and keep writing!

[Siddharth T]

Great feeling to your words! Cool!

[Ruby Read]

Your poems are so amazing! Keep writing, you're great at this!