Heart

Heart

My heart is closed,
Shattered,
Broken,
Empty

My heart is of stone,
Cold,
Hard,
emotionless,

Or atleast I wish it was
My heart is warmed by any friendly thing,
My heart is soft against any human thing,
Hope will be,

That my heart day
One day will fit just me,
It will then protect ,
What it lacks now,
Because I am soft,
From the inside out

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

You don't want a closed heart and mind. Never know what you will miss when you eyes and mind are locked up. Better to hold on to hope and love. If we are lucky. May come? I like the logic of this poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Eagle Cruagh]

Another sweet, sad song,
sad song sung
Beacuse you are soft ? No,
because you are not hard.
A beautiful poem.
------ Eagle Cruagh

[Jeremy Baker]

Hearftfelt and tenderly written ... very engaging!

[stars are far]

really great one :)

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Very Nice......

[Marshal Gebbie]

On the strength of this poem your name should be "Pink" not "Black".
You write, quite definately, in a pink aura, Black.

[BrynnaW.]

So, so very sad... Sticks and stones, sticks and stones. (I say this even though you may not know what I mean. I am NOT saying sticks and stone may break my bones) Anyway, an excellent write and an enjoyable read. Good job and keep on writing!

The Dutch rock... as stones, cold, fragile and tender.
Keep on writing Black ;)

[EricGodsil]

This was a decent write. Like it was stated previously I think at least a few people will be able to relate to this. It is pretty raw as well so there can really be no confusion with what you are trying to convey. The only part I was confused on was "that my heart day"...heart day?

Other than that confusion this is a good write.

[Rae]

I can relate. It's good to be relateable when it comes to writing. Keep writing!!