Chapter 27

Chapter 27

A Chapter by Black

‘’You shouldn’t have come through here!’’ a unknown man says to me.

 

‘’Now all hope is lost.’’  He says

 

I see another shady figure coming towards us.

 

Rule number 1: Never get yourself cornered, if you do you will be lost.

 

That was what dad said.

 

‘’Watch out little bee, get out of there!’’ I hear a voice in my head.

 

So I go with my instincts. Since i was little, dad put me on martial arts, now it would come in handy!

 

I kick the guy down and break his nose and jawr in a few blows.

 

I  want to throw another punch. But the guy is already away.

 

Clap, clap, I hear.

 

I turn around too the shady figure.

 

That was a mistake. I bump into someone.

 

He wraps his arms around me and for some reason I feel safe.

 

I snuggle closely to him. He sighs with relief.

His breath is warm against my cheek. He certainly is a had taller then me. He has quiet some muslces too.

I feel his muscles through his sweater.

He pulls me closer and I give in.

He softly kisses my neck.

 

Who is this, he makes me feel so great...

 So warm, my stomach is filled with butterflies.


I search his laps, and kiss him back.

It was an urge I couldn't deny.

When my lips meet his, I feel like i came home

 

‘’You certainly kicked a*s back there.’’ He says.

 

I jump up and almost run away. No way!



© 2011 Black


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Good Honest write....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh hell, another love interest? She jumps from guy to guy pret-ty fast. Wow, great chapter! MORE. NOW.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Couple spelling errors, but still amazing, I wonder who that guy was, maybe Andrew, I hope to see more!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Kathy was a real kick-a*s, so cool. I'm curious to see who the guy is. Probably Andrew. I think so at least.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Hope to see more soon! Also, misspelled words and awkward usage but very good! I really want more! Keep on writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice chapter, and the romantic scene!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


A few spelling errors, but very nicely written. I didn't expect that from Kathy. Gotta agree, she did kick a*s. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep the chapters coming^^

Posted 13 Years Ago



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