Faith

Turn assunder,
Winds of Faith
Don't tell me,
Did I fight to late?

Winds are blowing,
Water spilling,
Tornado's coming
I will have to pray

Sun is shining,
Blanked out re-view mirror,
All I have to do,
is a leap of faith to see,

Torn appart,
By little things,
My heart is shattered,
What does this mean?

You, I met,
You took away the cracks,
now I will have to have faith
Or you will be send back

My little angel,
My true savior,
You take away my pain,
All  I have to do is trust
And take a leap of faith

Reviews

[Searching 4 Serenity]

A much more personal way of describing faith to be focused in a universal manner for passionate couples who bond through unquestionable trust to reassure each other about the daily struggles of life.

[Jeremy Baker]

I like the link to weather and faith - good allusion and imagery. Well written throughout!

[Rae]

Very passionate. Keep writing!!

[EricGodsil]

First, stanza 5 last line. " send back" did you mean "sent back"? Other than that I enjoyed it. Not necessarily because of the subject, although I did enjoy, but because I am left wondering what this angel is. Rather it is a person, object or and actual angel. I also wonder what you are taking a leap of faith towards? I enjoy pieces that leave me wondering certain things. Good job on a good write.

[Coyote Poetry]

The leap of faith can be scary. Belief and faith is a good thing. We need to believe in something or we have no purpose. I like the feel and the desire of this poem. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Daniel Thomas Andrew Da..]

Faith is that source within us which propels us to find meaning in a topsy turvy life and drives us onwards to reach great accomplishments. Good poem. Daniel.

[MYSELF]

Black,

Nice work, simple work yet with a might to drift the tornadoes aside.

I was cought up by the lines
"Torn appart,
By little things,
My heart is shattered,
What does this mean?"

and how beautifully you winded up by the lines
"My little angel,
My true savior,
You take away my pain,
All I have to do is trust
And take a leap of faith "

Truly an amazing piece of work

Hope you always have an angel by your side to take away all your pains..
Good Job

MYLIFE

[Alexis]

Black,
This poem is so beautiful and sweet. Your words have such power. As a past review stated - the short sentences do make the impact greater!
Do you have a "little angel"? A "true savior"? Is there someone who takes away all of your pain? I sure hope you're truly fortunate to have someone like that in your life. :) They're sometimes hard to find, but we have to look!
You did a great job with this. I really enjoyed reading it! It brought back some memories.
Thanks for sharing!

[amdc101]

I absolutely love this poem. Very heartfelt and beautiful. Well done.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love the short sentences and the impact it has, wonderful ;)