Chapter 23

Chapter 23

A Chapter by Black

 

~POV Kathy~

 

Softly awakend. Softly went down, seeing Lizzy sleep in a chair with a book. Not wanting to disturb, i walk out the door.

 

Where should I go now?  The city is big...

Maybe I should just go to the lake again. It was so wonderfull. So quiet. So peacefull. It made me feel like i can fly. Just be myself again. No grieve, no sadness from within.

 

I know I must have hurt Lizzy, but  I can not help myself.

 

I have no were left to turn. I feel so lonely, but I can’t help myself. To push people away.

 

I turn around the block, and see Liv. I don’t want to think any longer.

 

So I call out: ‘’Hey Liv! Wait up!’’

 

Liv stops and turns around. Then a smile rises to her face.

 

‘’ Hey Kathy. How did yesterday go?’’ she asks hesitatingly.

 

‘’Well, I had to go out for a walk. Go see Lizzy too.’’

With this remark, Liv looks kind of weird out of her eyes. Then it dissapears and she continues.

 

‘’Andrew left, right after you. Did you see him?’’ She asks politely.

 

‘’ I just saw him for a little while, but left right after that.’’ I say. Whatever i said wrong. She didn’t seems to be so happy about that.

 

‘’Come along. Let’s go to a cheerleader bootcamp. You are invited. After all you are a gymnist.’’ She says with an angry glance in her eyes.

 

I’m sure I can not pass, but I’m neither liking what she is planning though.

 

 



© 2011 Black


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A nice return of liz. I like the pace and the storyline. A lot of opportunity for a powerful and interesting tale. I like the characters. A excellent short chapter.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


LIV IS AMAZING. BECAUSE SHE IS NAMED AFTER ME (I think). Brilliant chapter! Liv is turning out to be quite the villain, though I happen to be the villain in everyone's stories. I'm either pregnant or the villian, or in HOS's story, both. :3 WHYYY MEEE?! Oh wells, I'm popular. :3 Great new edition, reading on!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Do I sense a little bit of hostility in Liv's tone of voice....? Can't wait to see what happens, though I know it's not gonna be good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


OOh Liv sounds dangerous here, gotta watch out for that girl. I like this still, well done. One thing: grammar grammar grammar.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like it =] =] =] =] =] grammar just needs some tweaking =]

Posted 13 Years Ago


Uh-oh. RUN KATHY RUN!!! :) Misspelled words here and there. Anyway, a good chapter and I hope for more soon! Keep on writing!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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