Chapter 19

I wander downstairs again. Not really knowing what to do. Maybe I should go back to the lake again.

 

‘’Oh, there you are again.’’ Lizzy says.

 

‘’Care to join me for dinner, or no going out tonight.’’

‘’Fine.’’ I say with a sigh.

 

‘’What are you doing outside anyway?’’ she asks.

 

‘’Just looking around.’’ I say honestly. Not going into much detail. What does she care anyway?

 

‘’What are we eating anyway?’’ i ask so i can change the subject.

 

‘’Just some pizza’s from the oven. Home made. Hope you like them’’

‘’I’m sure they won’t be to bad.’’ I try to continue the friendly conversation. So my thoughts can’t just wander around.

 

Lizzy seems to be happy. I just can’t stand happy people around at the moment. There is to much sorrow.

 

‘’Will you excuse me. I had an appointment.’’ I say, to get out of the situation.

Lizzy seems to look uncomfortable, but then her gaze turns normal.

‘’With who if I may ask. We had some ground rules!’’ she says harshly.

 

‘’With Liv. We agreed to go eat a bit. Is that okay.’’  I respond

 

‘’Liv the head cheerleader? You make friends quickly. Well, for this one time okay.’’

 

Before she finishes the sentence I’m already out the door.

 

That was really rude. Plus I lied again, but i really couldn’t stand that happy talk. She acts like we know each other for forever. Though it is just even a day.

 

Just what to do now?

 

 

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A good situation. I like Lizzy allowing the girl to be free. Rules can create wall of separation. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Good flow....

[halflives]

I just can't stand happy people... BWHAHAHA Kathy is awesome. Though the mood swings are a bit irregular, this book is amazing! I find myself being yanked in! Well done!

[amdc101]

So much for getting along. Pizzas doesn't need an apostrophe. It seems the longer she goes with out thinking about her parents the happier she gets...

[Aurora Lynn]

Another mood swing. And last chapter she seemed so happy.... well, not happy, but you know what I mean.

[Luke Sampson]

I enjoyed this chapter because your dialogue is well structured. You build it up and let it carry itself. Now, this is the type of descriptive writing that I am talking about. You had a basic conversation, you gave it some flesh and I could form an image in my minds eye and watch the characters act out the scene. Just implement this into your general writing and your writing will reach new heights. Impressed =] keep it up =]

[TheElfPrincess]

Yay you continue it! I like this very much, a great chaoter. Well done.

[Black]

i am gonna finish it yay~~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Lst chapter?? Oh well... what a fine read and most enjoyable. Terrific story :)

[BrynnaW.]

Uncomfortable not unconfertable... Hahaha :) a good chapter... I just wish you were going to continue writing because I want more. I have already tried to change your mind so I guess this is the last chapter... :( Good job and NEVER stop writing!