chapter 14

chapter 14

A Chapter by Black

I ask her what he does at school. He seems too old to be in school. He seems more like he would be a college student.


“He’s  a senior. He’s on the track team.  He is so dreamy to watch” says Liv.

I steal a glance at him, trying not to let Liv see it. I think it would be amazing to watch him run. See his hair flowing as he runs by. I’ve never really thought about someone like that. There’s just something about him.


I turn back to Liv and ask her about his friends.


“That’s why people say he’s cold. He doesn’t have any friends. He ignores everyone who tries to get close to him. He even ignores me. I don’t see how anyone could ignore me, the head cheerleader, but he does.  Never gives me a second look.

Doesn’t even befriend anyone on his track team. But it just makes him so much more attractive, his mysteriousness.” she says quietly


I look at her and can’t help but think of the previous night.  He seemed so warm and inviting. I can’t imagine him being cold to people and ignoring them. I imagine the kiss, it felt so caring.


I could never imagine him being cold. He was so caring to me, a complete stranger. I tried to imagine it, but all I'm ending up with is the vision of last night.


I ask Liv if he has really never gotten close to anyone.

She lowers her voice.


“He’s never gotten close to anyone that I know of. Not since his parents died.” she says with sadness in her voice.


I start as she says that. I look over at him again. He lost his parents to. No, I don’t want to think about my parents. I push that thought out of my mind.


I tell Liv I have to go and run out of the bar. I don’t want to think about my parents, don’t want to think about someone else’s parents. I don’t want to think about death.



© 2011 Black


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A very good chapter. You open a lot of new doors for the story. I like how she escape when the conversation about death appears. I enjoyed this chapter.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


Is there a connection between their parents deaths? Maybe his family has powers to? I'll read on and find out!

Posted 13 Years Ago


So Andrew is his name... hmmm...

And that's weird, how both of their parents died. Is it a coincidence? I think not...

Posted 13 Years Ago


Keep on writing! I saw you were thinking about not continuing this but please do! Look at all these comments you are getting! I am reading on!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good thoughts, Nice chapter

Posted 13 Years Ago


Haha, Liv is awesome. Andrew sounds interesting. WRITE MORE~

Posted 13 Years Ago


A good, interesting chapter. I love Liv and Andrew sounds interesting. Want to read more, but there is none :P Hope you continue soon, I like this very much. Well done, good chapter.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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