chapter 13

chapter 13

A Chapter by Black

Chapter 13

 

His to long brown locks were all messy. Probably  because of the wind.

I can’t help but stare at him. I hope i look okay. I run my hands through my hair. Knowingly I will look like a mess anyhow.

 

I see in my eyes corners something moving and i notice Liv is running her hands through her hair also. 

 

He looks around and then sees me. A smile appears on his serious face. He looks a few moments and then inspects the room further. Then chosing to sit down a table in the corner across the room.

 

‘’Wait, what!?’’ says Liv.

 

‘’Do you know andrew?’’ she asks me demandingly.

 

I have to think about that answer. She really looks mad, her eyes look furious. I really can’t use her like a enemy of mine. So i decide to lie. I want to start talking but notice I’m without my breath, apparently I held it when...Andrew came in.

That is his name. Andrew. Nice name. While thinking that my stomach flutters

 

‘’No, I don’t know Andrew. I just moved in yesterday. When was i supposed to meet him?’’

Liv looks relieved. I feel worried. I  lied for the first time in my life.

No way i was planning to do that. Only Liv looks so happy .

 

She starts blabbering again, before i can finish my thoughts.

‘’He is so handsome isn’t he. Bad enough he is really cold.’’ She continues.

 

Cold, is she kidding me. I remember last night. That was anything but cold.  Only my curiousty gets the overhand and i start asking questions about him.



© 2011 Black


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I like this chapter. A lot of double-talk to stay out of trouble. A good conversation in this chapter. A very strong ending to this chapter.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think Liv has a crush on a certain stalker....

Posted 13 Years Ago


Liv...She seems pretty controlling to me...what would she have done if Kathy told the truth? She is a good addition to the story however, and I will read on later!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice chapter pl review again to correct some sentence mistakes Good Flow like a cascade keep it up thanks,

Posted 13 Years Ago


Liv is too cute. I wish I could read on... :P Keep on writing!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Loving Liv. LL :P Loved the chapter as well, it's getting better and better. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Getting interesting now!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Ooh. Liv is awesome. :D Kathy is awesome too~ Great work!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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