chapter 10

chapter 10

A Chapter by Black
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~~POV Miss Sulivian~~

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Chapter 10

 

~~ pov miss sulivain~

 

That was easy to say. She didn’t ignore me either. I’m happy that she is eating, but that silent was just unbearable. It just feels likes she is miles away. How hard  I try, I just can’t reach her, but we are going to live together. So she has to know a bit about me, but what can I tell, and what shan’t i tell her. I can’t tell her that part yet.

Not that certain part, she will run away as quick as she can. After all she is a kid of my brother.  So I can’t just tell her just yet.

 

Then what should i tell her? My name for starters, my age, my likes and dislikes maybe?

 

‘’Listen, Catherine, ow sorry Kathy. I know you don’t know me that well. For starters you don’t even know my name.’’

I see her open her eyes widely, kind of with suprise, but as soon as I saw the girl behind the coldness. She just changed back as soon as she could. It was like i only imagined it.

‘’My name is Lizzy. I always hated that name, made me look like a little kid.’’

 

I saw she was curious, about what I was telling her, but at the same time, she acted like she didn’t even care a little.  

That I thought was sad. We had to live together. I wish i could make her care, or make her feel safe. That only time could tell her. She will have to learn that on her own.

 

‘’I’’m 36. I know I’m younger then you expected.’’ I continue. Not knowing what to say else.

 

What else could I say, if i told her, her dad was my brother. There would only be questions. Which I couldn’t answer. Just yet anyway. So well, what else to tell.

 

‘’I love animals. Don’t ever harm one. I won’t tolerate that!’’ Oh, that sounded a bit harsh, now I should say something nicer.

 

‘’I love to cook and bake, so just let me know when you want something, I will make it for you.’’ Well, that sounded nicer atleast. What should I tell her now?

 

Some ground rules I guess. I hate even thinking about it.

 

‘’ You can come and go whenever you want, but I  expect you to let me know where you are. Plus that you eat regularly. You can’t skip breakfast, or you can’t go outside, and...’’

There she interupted me, i guess i was to harsh on her.

 

‘’Okay, so now i ate breakfast. So i can leave. I’m going out.’’

Before I can stop her, she is already out the door, into the sunny noon.



© 2011 Black


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I like the woman. Good to have rules and demands that need to be obeyed. No weakness in this chapter. Just honest and direct words. You have create a excellent story.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


That was quite rude of Kathy to just leave in the middle of her sentence. Quite rude indeed, but I guess I can understand why.

~Aurora Lynn

Posted 13 Years Ago


I hope she is acting this way because she is still down about what happened to her family. That I can understand, but I hope it wears off, she is driving me CRAZY!! Anyway, I think thats good- it means you are making her seem real. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Understanding each other.........

Posted 13 Years Ago


Good job! I saw some mistakes with lower cases and other things but good job! Reading on!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Another fine cahpter, dialogue flow is great!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Great chapter, but the chapter says chapter 11 and it's actually chapter 10. Other than that, great!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I like this very much, but don't forget your capitalation. Well done, another good chapter.

Posted 13 Years Ago


im loven it keep sending me the chapters

Posted 13 Years Ago



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