chapter 9

chapter 9

A Chapter by Black

Chapter 9

 

‘’Well, okay’’

Though I really didn’t feel like it. I knew I could never disobey a grown up while facing them. I could do alot in my old home, but not that.

No, I shake my head. I’m not thinking about that.

 

I reluctantly sit down on the chair. I start playing with my eggs which she put in front of me.

Though it is my favorite food. I couldn’t quiet put myself to eating it, but still I ate after a while, just to be done with it.

 

When I finished it, she gave me another portion.

I wanted to protest, but I was actually more hungry then I realized. So i started eating more of the eggs.

 

The silence was almost unberable, but I didn’t mind the silence. I could just hum a song in my head.  So no thoughts about last night, or my parents could pass.

 

Some times the thoughts couldn’t help but slip my carefully locked locks. Then i made the song harder, I had the melody, but then the words needed to rhyme in a rhyme scheme, like we learned in class. That way the silence kept me busy and at peace.

Apparently Miss Sulivain didn’t agree with me and wasn’t happy with the silence.

‘’You must want to know a thing or two about me’’ she starts off.

‘’Not really, no.’’ I response, just longing to the silence from just a few minutes ago.

 

‘’I’m going to tell you some things anyway.’’ She says, with a stubborn and also hurted look on her face, but when I checked the pain was dissapeared. I probably imagined it.

 

Before I know how to stop her, she starts telling.

 



© 2011 Black


Author's Note

Black
she is finally gonna get a name

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I like this chapter a lot. Two strong minds will have chaos. I like the way the woman took control and was going to tell her story. A excellent chapter.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm very interested in who Miss Sulivain is, and what her name is.

~Aurora Lynn

Posted 13 Years Ago


I'm looking forward to hearing what she has to say. I would say locked doors instead of locked locks, just a suggestion.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice movements......

Posted 13 Years Ago


"Not really, no." I cracked up laughing at this point. This line, I dunno why, but it, for me at least, gave Kathy a distinct character. Well done! Who's Miss Sullivan, and what's her name?

Posted 13 Years Ago


Yes, finally a name. I like this very much and for a Dutchmen your English is good. Well done, I liked this chapter.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Aha, good chapter!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Cool. Some mistakes again that are easily fixed. I am interested as to what this lady has to say. Hope to see more soon! It was enjoyable to read and well written as usual. Good job and keep on writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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