Chapter 6

 

Chapter 6

 

Wow, it is really dark. It is like no lights are even working. I see the laterns, but they don’t beam any light. This place or better said, this dump. Doesn’t have any lights. The houses are far apart and have all big lawns, but well no use thinking about it. Let’s just get the hell out of here.

 

I start wandering around. Thinking but not thinking. Just a silent peace. Just counting my steps in this dark night. The safest place to be. Well not technicly of course, but the peace and the quiet gives such vibes. It just calms me down.

 

Lost in thoughts i’m counting my steps out loud.

 

‘’One, two, tree, One two tree.’’

 

This is all i just needed.

 

‘’AUW’’

 

‘’AUCH’’ I hear a guy respond.

 

‘’Are you okay?’’ he asks.

 

‘’I guess...’’  I mumble. I look up and can’t help but stare.

 

He is the most beautifull guy I ever saw. Well, handsome, but that was just not the word I was looking for. He is kind of mind blowing. He had something ethereal over him.

His brown soft hair was a little to long, but that made it even nicer.  It was curled in the back of his neck.  His grey are stand kind, while looking worried.

His nose and mouth were well proportioned. His muscled arms, neck, legs and shoulders, so far i can see. Are very big.

His sloppy t-shirt and jeans looked good on him, with under that a pair of white sneakers.

 

‘’Yes... , yes I’m fine’’ I mumble.

 

‘’Oh your lip is hurt. Let me do something about that.’’

 

He leans forward, and gives a kiss on my lips.

 

A soft and tender kiss, he barely touches my lips, but just enough to feel the heath of his breath on my lips.

 

My eyes fluther, and my finger tips start to tingel.

 

He softly pushes his lips more against mine. I can’t help but answer that kiss.

 

For a second, I give over.

Then my minds starts working again, and I stop the kiss.

I look at him and he looks confused but with a big smile back.

I mumble ‘’Goodbye!’’ and stumble away, and run of back into the night.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice chapter. Nothing like a stranger in the night kiss to leave a memory of a good night. A strong chapter.
Coyote

[Aurora Lynn]

That was... kind of random. Because when I run into a person the first thing I ALWAYS do is kiss them deeply and passionately. But who knows, there might be a reason for it!

These chapters keep getting easier and easier to read, which is good!

~Aurora Lynn

[amdc101]

ethereal- I love that word!
Well! He works fast doesn't he?!
An interesting chapter, a nice short read...I'll keep going!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Beautiful moments nicely created the situation and background is good

[halflives]

Hm, that was interesting. Does she even know this boy's name? It seems like some kind of random romance, that you just thrust out because. Maybe it's just that -- random, or maybe it has a purpose. Let's see!

[TheElfPrincess]

A few mistakes, you wrote tree instead of three. Still a good, romantic chapter. Mostly I hate it, but since my book requires a lot I began to appriciate it. Well done, good chapter.

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very nice romantic action!!!

[BrynnaW.]

Ooo wow romance! I usually hate romance but it was ok. Make my stomach flutter. :) it was a wonderful chapter. Very well written. How sad she just ran away. :( good job an keep on writing!!