A lullaby

my personal favorite.. because i don't have a person like that in my life, i can't do much but wish others have, let me know if you guys have one, and who it is! if you get what i mean by it that is!

A lullaby

 

Lullaby that will make you sleep

A lullaby that makes you see

See the beauty of that one

That one person that sings the lullaby song

The song that is being sung

By the one that makes time

To let you hear the lullaby song

The lullaby with peaceful things

All the good things within

Plus the person who it sings

Don’t forget that he made time

To give you your own little smile

When you’re older and out-grown

Think about this lullaby song

It will always stay

Stay to be

To be as a rock in the storm

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Loving it!! Very beautiful, calming and peaceful :)

[∂αʌ<..]

i think you shoul like sing it...this poem...only then you can grasp the meaning of it..
hmm...unfortunately, no one is here to sing me a lullaby but i pretty much like the way you did this lullaby poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. Time with children is very important. Children want to hear a parent voice in a lullaby or reading a story. Thank you for a amazing poem. Took me back to when I held my kids and told them great story.
Coyote

[amdc101]

Think about this lullaby song
It will always stay
Stay to be
To be as a rock in the storm

Love that. Nicely done. The only thing I don't like is using the last word of the previous line as the first word in the next line. To me it just makes it choppier and Personally, I like a smoother flow.

[TheElfPrincess]

A very sweet lullaby, calm and peaceful. Well done.