hurt

Hurt is hard,
but still so soft,
The words are hell
while hands are weak,

Keep on fighting
Or blow a retreat!
retread is to easy
to obscure,

but fighting makes no sense either,
because it will be sore,
you will have to travel to all your faults,

and you can't deny those previous sprouts,
you have to erase,
or ignore
''or throw away,

Until you can say
I did everything, that i could have done
Losing my universe, moon and sun,
But i changed in every way,
and it is not me, which to blame,
which will cause to lock that pain away!

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Some hard, apinful thoughts here, great poetic write :)

[Lily Mae]

It's an awful feeling to feel as though you've lost the universe, moon and sun when the love walked away.... and yet it's still there living in you..xx

[amdc101]

I really like the beginning. Nice job on this poem, as always.

[Tasha]

This was really deep but really good. Keep it up!
♥ Ta'Shandra

[BrynnaW.]

deep.... Good job! I really enjoyed reading it! Keep on writing! (I know I say that a lot) :)

[Ruby Read]

Wow, that's really deep. This poem is really good, keep writing everyday! :)