hurt

Hurt is hard,
but still so soft,
The words are hell
while hands are weak,

Keep on fighting
Or blow a retreat!
retread is to easy
to obscure,

but fighting makes no sense either,
because it will be sore,
you will have to travel to all your faults,

and you can't deny those previous sprouts,
you have to erase,
or ignore
''or throw away,

Until you can say
I did everything, that i could have done
Losing my universe, moon and sun,
But i changed in every way,
and it is not me, which to blame,
which will cause to lock that pain away!

Reviews

[Dove]

this is wonderful, you are a great writer!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice expression........

[Siddharth T]

I love the emotion you stir up in this one...

Wonderful poem...

[Coyote Poetry]

A poem with truth in the poem. Hurt can change our world and how we look at life.
"and you can't deny those previous sprouts,
you have to erase,
or ignore
''or throw away, "
Better to live with the pain and become wiser. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Desmund Tiny]

very interesting poem. I like it!!! keep writing!!!

[Rae]

Interesting point of view. Keep writing!!

[Thea]

Oh yeah, hurt is hard... :(
This is an outstanding piece for me...Very striking enough... :)))

[prodicallife]

wow what an excellent piece i loved the way you potrayed it butifull..
Great flow....

Regards
PRODICAL

[TheElfPrincess]

A raw, stunning piece. Well done, I like the emotion put into this.

[∂αʌ<..]

some grammar mistakes...and i think its "retreat" instead of "retread"

"Hurt is hard,
but still so soft..", else, you shock me from the first verse itself! a very nice poem!