If i

If I

 

If I could be strong

If I could relay

Then others would be happy

Happy all the time

If I had emotion

If I could feel

Then my writing would be greater

Greater than anything

If I could comfort

If I could trust

Then I would have loads of friends

Friends that are a must

If I stopped wondering

If I skipped trying

Then the result would be

Be me all the time

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime we must look above the world needs of us. Be happy with who you are. I like the poem. Your questions and desire are felt by the all of us. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Luke Sampson]

You my dear, you are talented =]

[deeps]

sad write really, but written so well. enjoyed.

[Lily Mae]

Your emotions are well described with this.. excellent write..x

[Rae]

Very relatable. Keep writing!!

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice write

[∂αʌ<..]

a wonderful poem...i think "If I" is related to everyone here!
a lovely one which i enjoyed!

[BrynnaW.]

I really loved reading this! Such a great write. Keep on writing!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A great read :)

[amdc101]

This is a beautiful poem. Nicely done.