Lately

Lately

 

Lately my thoughts drift away

Away in a big black time

The things I hear in real life

Life that has been skipping by

Can’t be caught and can’t process

Because I’m in this place without thoughts

When I notice I’m in there

And start to think

This place will fade away

I still don’t know my thoughts

And I lost time

Only thing is what I wonder

Where is this place?

Place without time

Place without thoughts

Then it comes to me

And I know

It’s the save empty place

The place in my own little mind

 

Reviews

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Excellent poem that captures some emotions really poetically :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the way you took the reader on the journey in your words to a very good ending. We need places for our thoughts and concerns. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dewella~Vintella]

I love it, and its true in its essence. We all have that place inside our own minds, where nothing exists but ourselves.

Wonderful write.

Dewalla~Vintella

[amdc101]

I really love this poem. But in the second to last line shouldn't it be safe? I like the idea and the ending. Nice job. :)