Lately

Lately

 

Lately my thoughts drift away

Away in a big black time

The things I hear in real life

Life that has been skipping by

Can’t be caught and can’t process

Because I’m in this place without thoughts

When I notice I’m in there

And start to think

This place will fade away

I still don’t know my thoughts

And I lost time

Only thing is what I wonder

Where is this place?

Place without time

Place without thoughts

Then it comes to me

And I know

It’s the save empty place

The place in my own little mind

 

Reviews

[Emily B]

lovely :)

[deeps]

Amazing write here.
I liked this

[Thea]

Striking write...Keep writing... :)))

[TheElfPrincess]

A strong, sweet poem. I loved reading this. Well done, the poem was beautiful.

[prodicallife]

Black
That carries a fragnance of innocence, this is so pleasent
loved it

Regards
PRODICAL

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Sentemental reality it strengthen the essence of love..........

[Tasha]

Really good job. I really liked it, you captured these emotions well.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[LivingDeath]

Very good job :) I really liked this piece.
~LivingDeath

[Rae]

Cool, but the fourth line should be "Life that HAS been..." Keep writing!!