Mist

Mist

 

The mist out of the sun valley

Came along like there was no time

The mist as thick as walls

Making thinking impossible, no thoughts to ride

 

No one could call

Call out to souls in the sunny place

The mist to thick

To thick to erase ´

 

Erase the stubborn thoughts of not believe

That’s making impossible from within to see

See your soul

The good side of time

 

Time is timeless in sun valley lines

The books that were written were open to all

Now the books stay closed

Closed like the walls

 

The soul to sore to see the truth

The mist takes away the chance

The chance to be enlightend

Enlightend by the heavenly truth

Reviews

[TheElfPrincess]

Great flow and structure, I could see it playing in my head. Well done, I loved it.

[Thea]

Wow! I really love the imagery here...Makes me remember the movie "The Mist"... :)))
Nice poem...LIKE! XD