Love

FIRST ONE I MADE WITH SOMEONE this one is made with Chares of this site :) hope you like it..

Love

You disagree,
because im not willing to see,
the love you claim to have for me,
I know, your not willing to share,

The love is true, forever true
thats the most important thing i have to share with you
that thing I have inside will never die for you
its bigger then oceans and seas
bigger then the world or universe,
all love just for you, coming from me

Well so you claim
To obtain that emotion that you have
Still it always alters like sun and snow

 it still would not be right to deny,
but those feelings dont touch me
because your not nearby

And so it follows
You drift away like a cloud across the sky
 your emotions uncaptured
and im staying behind
the cloud without a sky
thats the way i feel
until i follow the memories,
and capture you again

So we fight on and on
No one leaving until its done
No one staying, maybe sometimes until dawn
then the fights starts over again
emotions uncaptured by each  end

Reviews

[Tasha]

Great collab. It was wonderful.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Dewella~Vintella]

Great job on the collab. It turned out wonderfully. ^^

Vinny~

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A beautiful collab. I dig it loads!!

[BrynnaW.]

Very strong, well written, and emotional. I loved it! What a unique description!! Fights, Memories, Love, Emotion, share.... A very beautiful poem. Good job, I really enjoyed reading it! Keep on writing!