Summer wind

i made this for a friend for his gf, hope you all like it..

 

The soft summer breeze,

Through your soft curly brown hair

The big hazel eyes,

That give me a scare

 

Not one of fear,

Neither of pain,

But a scare to remain

Remain in this love

 

The love in this moment

The beautifull bliss

I squeeze in your hand

Making sure it doesn’t dissappear like the mist

 

 

The bench outside is old

With our names carved in,

But I hope we last longer

Then this wooden thing,

 

I’ll make sure,

I’m etched like that in your heart

And your already in mine

Never knew, love could be this devine

 

Reviews

[Black]

Don't you guys think it misses emotions?

[Tasha]

This was very pretty I'm sure she'll love it because I did.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[deeps]

Ah This is so lovely and so well written.
Love the poetic feel of this.