Summer wind

i made this for a friend for his gf, hope you all like it..

 

The soft summer breeze,

Through your soft curly brown hair

The big hazel eyes,

That give me a scare

 

Not one of fear,

Neither of pain,

But a scare to remain

Remain in this love

 

The love in this moment

The beautifull bliss

I squeeze in your hand

Making sure it doesn’t dissappear like the mist

 

 

The bench outside is old

With our names carved in,

But I hope we last longer

Then this wooden thing,

 

I’ll make sure,

I’m etched like that in your heart

And your already in mine

Never knew, love could be this devine

 

Reviews

[∂αʌ<..]

very very romantic poem huh! lol
hope the gal like it!
lovely!

[Desmund Tiny]

very well written, very romantic...... i like it....

[Short.Nerd]

It's so sweet and beuaiful and absolutely awesome! Excellent write!

[alexis]

thats really pretty

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Very romantic, love it!!

[amdc101]

Beautiful. :)

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Lovely autograph wrote in the old bench and the valley rock side....Nice

[BrynnaW.]

Very emotional and descriptive. I liked it! Good job. It was very well written. Keep on writing!

[Chares]

Touches the person just enough to not make them get drowned in emotions, but enough to show them that it's very meaningful. Very poetic.

[TheElfPrincess]

Sad yet beautilful. lovely write, well done.