Fading

Faded

 

The little whispers by the sky

The evening falls,

The sun isn´t nearby

The whispered words by the wind

 

Words that inspire,

The word that just is

The sun is, the sky is

Hell faded, heaven dissapeared like the mist

 

Angels fell

The demons rise,

Fears are coming

Nights are longer then the midnight sky

 

The night unlit

The moon and stars are gone

The inside darkness is whispered by the wind,

The heaven is gone,

 

There is no hope anymore

There is no place for peace

The hell is emerging,

That is the message of my dreams

Reviews

[prodicallife]

Dreams play avery strong role in once life, it at times build the future for people through its carving style. it took me back a few months where my wildest dream never let me sleep in the plunge of silence.

i absolutly loved the second last paragraph. No doubt you carry a great power of expressing your feelings along with evryone..

beautifull keep writting
thanks foe lovely poem

PRODICAL

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Enjoy the beauty of fading........that`s a different world. nice job

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Wow, once more a very powerful message. Nicely written. I especially like the last two lines.

[Coyote Poetry]

Dreams can tell you the future sometime. With the way of this world. Bad dreams could be the future. Need for the leaders of this world. We must stop the useless killing and fix the real problems. Hunger and HIV. A powerful message in your poem. Need a billion people in this world to say. "We had enough. Put the guns down. Maybe we all could have better dreams? Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[paul]

yes, darkness all around.

line after line of brilliance.