Fading

Faded

 

The little whispers by the sky

The evening falls,

The sun isn´t nearby

The whispered words by the wind

 

Words that inspire,

The word that just is

The sun is, the sky is

Hell faded, heaven dissapeared like the mist

 

Angels fell

The demons rise,

Fears are coming

Nights are longer then the midnight sky

 

The night unlit

The moon and stars are gone

The inside darkness is whispered by the wind,

The heaven is gone,

 

There is no hope anymore

There is no place for peace

The hell is emerging,

That is the message of my dreams

Reviews

[Robert Robbie Lord Dudl..]

this poem it's beautiful a mystery and a misery, at night, at once
pulling the hood down on a cold walk home continuing on-ward
as the stars finally faded and disappeared from sight bringing
a hope into the bleak wee hours of night when i couldn't sleep
which now lays across my mind to blind my shaded eyes leaning
for-ward into this dark poem to see one candle per person

[∂αʌ<..]

strong and powerful poem...your poem related to that poem is just amazing!
you described quite a picture here!

[amdc101]

Dark and powerful. I like it.
Thanks again for joining Writers Unite!

[Desmund Tiny]

wow... powerful poem. I like its darkness. I love it!!!!1 ^^,

[Caradoc]

Very evocative, with good imagery and a pleasent rhyme scheme. It flows well and makes the reader want to devour the next line. The overall story of this poem reminds me a great deal of passages in The Book of Revelations. St. John the Apostle saw that in his dreams as well. Interesting.

In my own personal opinion, the Hell is already here. Has been for some time. All we can do is try and survive it.

[BrynnaW.]

Very dramatic, sad, beautiful, wonderful, and an overall great write! Very unique! I loved it! Good job and keep on writing!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Love how the short sentences add to the drama!!

[deeps]

Such a powerful read and write here.
I really enjoyed this write. Very nicely done.
Love the darkness of this.

[TheElfPrincess]

A very strong message, within a beautiful poem. Well done. I enjoyed this very much.