Eggs

I made this for fun , just read it, and please give me critics I just love eggs

Eggs
The eggs sizzling in the pan
The ways to use
The ways began

It could be raw
Like an open wound
It could make you sick
or even thick

THick will be your veins
The cholosterol rising
Which is a shame

Laying, awaiting
Is a hearth attack
But I still love this greatly made egg!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. I like a over easy egg on toast. Nothing better. A very good poem. Food is our number one desire. Nothing wrong with poetry about food and sweets. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Callista-Jade]

Say "what a shame" instead of "which is a shame". I love eggs! Scrambled, preferably.
Great poem!

[BlueLagoon]

As an egg lover (Eggland's Best Eggs), I've never seen anyone speak so highly of eggs o.O. Thanks for letting us know you feel lol.

[Linear]

Eggs oh those lovely juicy eggs, scrambled poached or fried I'll love them till I die....::
And that maybe sooner than I think!! Hmmm maybe I should diet or just use more ink. ;0). Enjoyed

[Larry Dyson]

fun write...exploring with free verse...I like..keep it up.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

very nice message like it..........

[al25]

LOL I really liked this one. It made me smile :)

[prodicallife]

hahahahahahaha.....good one i enjoyd it....lol.....
Regards
PRODICAL

[TheElfPrincess]

It was a really funny piece. I liked it. Well done.

[Andoux]

Its quite silly on the surface, but i think it might have a deeper meaning!
if it does, i didnt find it! maybe you hope someone will have a heart attack? 0_e
great piece anyhow!