Soft Hearts

Another hear felt poem that II hope to submit to the writing contest.

Every person has a soft spot inside

No matter how hard the heart or how cold thy mind

That soft spot that people always want to hide

If it won't show, than you shall find

They may be mean, they may not show respect

But there always something inside

All they may leave you with  is years of neglect

until there inside comes  on the outside

There's a spot in everyone's heart

It just takes one person to find it

It's through the friendship art

When they stop trying to hide it

Author's Note

Another poem written by me. If it weren't for Dragonwing I would've never known that this talent existed.

Reviews

[NotUsinganymore]

Very interesting poem and it had a good flow too. However I think some people don’t have a soft side maybe towards their family but not.

[LazerRays]

Aye, true true! What a lovely poem to write! Everyone does have a soft spot no matter how hard and tough the person is. There's always a place that bleeds! I enjoyed this poem greatly! The only issue I saw was that 'than' should be 'then'
haha, than is used for a comparison and then is used for something to follow. That's all! Minor detail! :D