Not bad actually. Allow me to have a little fun with you:
Dear boy
not the pi
ss
but the vinegar
you know you
r
more clever
ish
books are
poems
tucked
into
homes
sentences
wholly
completely
trapped
once free.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
hahaha! your great. I have actually had a real go at a poem! Called My Girl :)
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