A children's story

The children played and laughed
In the cul de sac they were trapped 
One kid was left out
One kid tried to shout
He knew they were trapped
"The world is ending" He cried
The other kids shied away
Nobody wanted to play with him
They didn't even have the decency to stay near him 
"I'm alone" He thought
So the little boy brought a trap
With a snap of his fingers and a rap of his tongue he shouted as loud as his lungs could shout
"The moon is falling"
The other kids ignored him 
But! Indeed the moon was falling 
Fall it did onto the earth
Like a kid that just got hurt it fell
And that
Was the trap

Reviews

[Joshua Carl Cruz]

I cn say this, once polished up, tightened up, will kill. Great premise and good visuals. Need any help le me know