Frozen December

A song that I thought of off the top of my end. I wish you all could hear it.

I walk the an endless street.

The snow all around

and it falls on me.

The snow cries, under my feet.

 

The days of the year

are bright and sunny.

But winter is here.

Frozen ears,

and a nose thats runny.

 

Skies of grey,

ground is white.

A blizzard hit us,

through the night. . . . .

 

Its a frozen december.

The cold feeling,

runs through your veins.

I try to remember,

that its all getting better, in the spring.

 

When the snow falls,

from those black clouds.

I stand up tall,

In pure white rain.

 

It got its upsides,

its advantages.

Like Christmas and Kwanza,

though its hard to manage it.

 

Concerts and specials,

and days outta school.

We surely will forget,

half of what we knew.

 

Skies of grey,

ground is white.

A blizzard hit us,

throughout the night. . . . . .

 

Its a frozen december.

The cold feeling,

runs through your veins.

I try to remember,

it will all get better, in the spring.

 

Oh-ohoooooooooo

Oh-ohoooooooooo

Oh-ohoooooooooo

Oh-ohoooooooooo

 

Nothing is better.

Than this freezing cold weather.

I hope it last forever,

the sun and snow together.

'Cause this is my

Frozen December. .  . .  . . .

 

Reviews

[Zoe Jay]

Very musical, nice rhyme and rhythm, unusual and descriptive. I like the way you move from describing the weather and landscape generally, to describing how the season personally affects you. I also like the contradictions between hoping for the winter to end and spring to arrive, but also enjoying winter and appreciating it for what it is. I think we all have this duality about winter! A simple but evocative piece.

[Calypso]

Winter reminds me of death and your poem was able to describe my feeling well.

[Short.Nerd]

A beautiful poem great job!

[Amanda]

This was very beautiful. I personally loathe, rue, and overall detest the winter months, but this poem almost makes me reconsider. Almost lol. Very nicely done. Fabulous imagery.