Pain & Suffering No More

I've had to pay for your mistakes

now I'm about to make

the souls of your prey

free themselves today.

 

You strike no more,

at the heart you tore.

A feeling of loss,            

is what you brought.

 

I worked all day

and stressed at night.

So who the hell are you

to steal my might.

 

I might sound crazy,

maybe insane.

But this is all a game

and your to blame.

 

You were blind,

possibly out of your mind.

'Cause when I fell,

you didn't even care.

Who could I tell?

Its just not fair.

 

I had to struggle,

just to stay on my feet.

Like a brother,

can't you see what I mean?                  

My sorrow,

will be gone by tommorrow.

This pain & suffering cannot bend,

all I hope

is that it soon ends.

 

 

Reviews

[Calypso]

I liked that you put the chapters in poem form. Despite being of a conventional idea for a book you have made this enjoyable to read.