Heart's Vows

To LM, for I'd never choose another. To you LM, and to the vows I'll never hear you say.

It so happens, when it does

That your decisions aren’t yours.

And I loved a man, as it was

But didn’t know which one for sure.

One said, “I’ll let you choose him, yes I will.

And though it’d hurt I’d love you still.”

The other said, “You are my love,

We were fated by those  above.

You are my moon, my oxygen, my all,

I will always be there when you fall.”

I chose the man of fewer vows,

Because his heart spoke, not his mouth.

Reviews

[NICK ARMBRISTER]

the game of love... reminds me of russian roulette. with a full chamber mind you...

[Bitter Overdose]

What makes it an even more interesting game is that you can't win it :)

[NICK ARMBRISTER]

or if you know youll lose from the start and you still enter the game, to lose. as a student if air warfare, never ever fight the enemy on their rules. but what happens if you do? theres a gothic saying... doing the wrong thing for the right reasons...

[Bitter Overdose]

the wrong thing for the right reasons... ooh, I love that.

[NICK ARMBRISTER]

its a goth thing. i used to live by it. now hmm...

[Bitter Overdose]

goth no goth, it's the real deal, that saying

[NICK ARMBRISTER]

your comment on cat win reminds me on a crazy but fascinating dog fight of an english electric lighting jet fighter and a late mark griffon engine spitfire, maybe mark24. was in the late 50s. spit could never win even tho it could do 450mph level flight and dive past 600mph. ligthning was 1500mph jet. the spit could out turn the jet. jet could climb from below, hit from above, hi speed slash attack. you get the idea. yet they did this fight. shame both werent armed... the lightning pilot had a bang seat, the spit pilot a chute...

[Bitter Overdose]

I actually laughed out loud when you said ''you get the idea'', cause I actually don't. But I will presume (am I safe to presume?) that this was an epic fight?

[NICK ARMBRISTER]

the idea of a fight... like if i fight chuck norris. he kick my arse but i do my best. a 1 sided fight. im the spitfire, hes the jet lol. damn id love to see any fight like that. i dont like ppl getting hurt tho. not a peacenik and cant stand john lennon but anti war...

[Bitter Overdose]

Woah, easy there on John Lennon.

[NICK ARMBRISTER]

really i dont like him.BUT some of the issues he stood for are relevant today and i agree on. like peace for example...

[Bitter Overdose]

But you don't like him because...?

[NICK ARMBRISTER]

just dont like him. same with ozzy osbourne lol. yes i knkw both contributed greatly to music and that cant be ignored, both are musical greats. soe people like robbie williams, i dont like him. nor michael jackson. none of them tick the right boxes. my views...

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice work. I like your style of writing, the rhythm and rhymes are elegant.

[Dr. Wood ?]

wise choice...well written